Sunday, September 23, 2007

thesis statement

"Therefore the sole reason for George Orwell to shoot the elephant was to protect his self-esteem and not to look like a fool, although his conscience told him to do otherwise".

1 comment:

Bina said...

Ok. But leave the word "Therefore" out of the sentence. And be sure to discuss the other reasons he might have shot the elephant as counter-arguments, but be ready to disprove them in your essay.